LOVE
Posted by ~Ray @ 2008-11-17 12:11:57
THIS POEM IS DEDICATED TO MY EX... THE L THE L STANDS FOR THE LIES THE LIES YOU TOLD SO PATHALOGICAL AND MENDACIOUS THE LIES THEY CAUSED TEARS FROM MY EYES THE LIES THAT ENDED US JUST THE LIES SO THERE WAS NO TRUSTTHE O THE O STANDS FOR OVER AND OVER THE TIMES I TRIED OVER AND OVER THE TIME I CRY OVER AND OVER THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL OVER AND OVER THE WAY I WANTED TO KILL... YOU.. OVER AND OVER TIMES I TOLD YOU I HATED YOU AND NOW I FEEL LIKE I MEAN ITTHE V THE V STANDS FOR VINDICTIVE YOU LURED ME INTO YOUR TRAP TOLD ME I CAN HAVE YOUR HEART BUT I GOTTA GIVE MINE.. WELL I WANT IT BAC.. U TOLD ME FALSE TRUTHS AND HOW U LOVED ME SO. YOU TOLD ME SO MANY THINGS THAT I JUST WANT TO LET GO. YOU WALK AROUND THINKIN NOTHIN OF ME I SWORE I SWORE U LOVED METHE ETHE E IS FOR END THIS RELATIONSHIP ENDING.. ITS OVER ITS DONE.. I DONT HAVE TIME FOR LITTLE ASS BOYS SO IM SORRY WE'RE DONE... BROKEN PROMISES AND EMPTY I LOVE YOUS.. GUESS WE WERE DOMED FROM THE MINUTE I SAW U.. SO YES THIS LOVE IS NOT SO SENSUAL AND SWEETTHIS LOVE IS LIES OVER AND OVER AND THIS VINDCTIVE ENDING... LADY B(I HATE HIM) =(
i really liked this one.... very nicely done as i felt all the conviction behind the words you used to discribe each letter..... you really put alot into this as i have read some other poems by you and it made it very easy fro me to believe you in this one considering the other poems you wrote..... but by its self this poem was still very good in its own rights... i would have to agree with you on this as not all the time can love be sexual and sweet... it has a way to turn and become very viol...
i really liked this one.... very nicely done as i felt all the conviction behind the words you used to discribe each letter..... you really put alot into this as i have read some other poems by you and it made it very easy fro me to believe you in this one considering the other poems you wrote..... but by its self this poem was still very good in its own rights... i would have to agree with you on this as not all the time can love be sexual and sweet... it has a way to turn and become very violent and messy it its own respect.... i do like the spin you put on each letter my favorite letter is V that one really hit me hard for some reason i connected with that one the most....... i tihnk im gona favor this poem of yours because i know im gona wanta read this again at some point :) it was my honor to read this and my pleasure to comment on it for you[ADVERTHERE]Related article:
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