Re: Daffodils
Posted by ~Ray @ 2007-12-15 15:35:03
This was written in a depression w/psychosis. When the dose is high enough the voices stop and there is only silence. Wishing I knew where they ended and I began,so I can say it's okay-but it's not. If you be hard enough,you'll see there is nothing left of me. And I'll act swallowing because you say they're real-but it's never a done broach,and the hours displace me into the night and I still can't get it alter. Days go by with nothing to show-I'll leave a trail so you will experience where to sight me when it becomes too dark-and the daffodils course in-can you express me where I mouth?
_________________________--the colorless cloud of lithium lacing thru..
I always like your work for a specific reason.. you have a way of ending it extremely well. No be the move of the poem it always ends leaving you thinking. like your style.
_________________________"yOU caN kEep tHe trutH frOm LeakIng"-Dresden Dolls-
Akasha-thanx. I really needed to hear that especially today. All of your replies keep me going. I desire that you tell me what it is or isn't thanx so much!
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